Comments on: Los Angeles http://cannishgirl.wordpress.com/2007/11/28/los-angeles/ poetry, fiction, drabble, excerpts, rough work Thu, 19 Jun 2008 14:12:31 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: whisperedsweet http://cannishgirl.wordpress.com/2007/11/28/los-angeles/#comment-13 whisperedsweet Wed, 05 Dec 2007 10:45:25 +0000 http://cannishgirl.wordpress.com/2007/11/28/los-angeles/#comment-13 I'm not sure what you mean by all the "stereotypes"...but okay. I’m not sure what you mean by all the “stereotypes”…but okay.

]]> By: ladymark http://cannishgirl.wordpress.com/2007/11/28/los-angeles/#comment-12 ladymark Mon, 03 Dec 2007 22:03:42 +0000 http://cannishgirl.wordpress.com/2007/11/28/los-angeles/#comment-12 It's not THE Emily, I just needed a name and was uncreative. :P Although that would be an interesting development in her life. It’s not THE Emily, I just needed a name and was uncreative. :P Although that would be an interesting development in her life.

]]> By: Allegra http://cannishgirl.wordpress.com/2007/11/28/los-angeles/#comment-11 Allegra Mon, 03 Dec 2007 19:21:05 +0000 http://cannishgirl.wordpress.com/2007/11/28/los-angeles/#comment-11 "And you know, they lied to you, Emily, because none of the feathers on the beach belong to any angels." I love this line; it gave me chills. you're a wonderful writer, Maddie. And, naturally, Emily FTW. (does this mean that eventually Emily moves to LA?) “And you know, they lied to you, Emily,
because none of the feathers on the beach
belong to any angels.”

I love this line; it gave me chills.

you’re a wonderful writer, Maddie. And, naturally, Emily FTW.
(does this mean that eventually Emily moves to LA?)

]]> By: mg http://cannishgirl.wordpress.com/2007/11/28/los-angeles/#comment-8 mg Thu, 29 Nov 2007 00:26:36 +0000 http://cannishgirl.wordpress.com/2007/11/28/los-angeles/#comment-8 hehe, all the stereotypes! hehe, all the stereotypes!

]]> By: whisperedsweet http://cannishgirl.wordpress.com/2007/11/28/los-angeles/#comment-7 whisperedsweet Wed, 28 Nov 2007 09:17:23 +0000 http://cannishgirl.wordpress.com/2007/11/28/los-angeles/#comment-7 "You just smiled bittersweet and said you didn’t believe in angels" Definately my favorite lines of the poem. I think it ties the whole thing together. “You just smiled bittersweet and said
you didn’t believe in angels”

Definately my favorite lines of the poem. I think it ties the whole thing together.

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